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Shameless self-promotion #2 (or "O wad some pow'r" etc.)12 o'clock, August 9, 2004The September issue of Asimov’s is on the stands, with my name on the cover and everything. (When you get to the line of dialogue that has the word sure in it twice, substitute sir for one of them. Which, I leave up to you, but there is a right answer and a wrong one.) This story, “The Third Party”, is my first pro print magazine sale, and it’s an interesting experience, reading this story this way. It’s meant to be the first part of a novel, a novel I spent half of last year outlining and then set aside. Two or three people saw the outline. The main feedback I got was, “What’s with the monks?” I think that in not talking about the rest of it they were being kind. Reading it this way, presented differently (Asimov’s really needs to go to two columns, or else budget for more paper), with some time and distance, it’s easier to put myself into the shoes of someone reading it for the first time, whether here in Asimov’s or as some of the opening chapters of a novel. Easier to read it not in terms of what I had intended to write next, but in terms of what possibilities arise from this beginning. Easier to see that the novel I write could be much more interesting than the one I would have written from last year’s outline. |
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Hey, I got my subscription issue in the mail and look forward to reading your story! :-) |
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It's a fine story, David. Well done. |
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Thanks! |
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“See here, professor. I've worn a mask before now. I've ridden with the Secret Empire. I've seen an islander hanged just for complimenting a fishmonger's wife on her dress, and I've held the rope that did it.” The Specialist was definitely my favorite character :) It's interesting that this story came about as part of a longer work, with a specific (though obviously malleable) future worked out in great detail. One of the things I enjoyed reading 'The Third Party' is that I really didn't know what would happen (even in the last paragraphs). Lots of exotic locales (and even a few dirigibles!) for those like myself who suffer from short attention spans; spectacular name-dropping (the Secret Empire, etc). Group names like 'The Dealers' put me in mind of Asimov's Foundation stories, and there was also a strong noir vibe (steampunk?), as well as a clean sort of TNG optimistic-future faction, all blended quite seamlessly into something unique. All in all, a pretty swell 'big 3' debut :) —— Robert Burke Richardson, 12:34 PM, Tuesday, August 10, 2004 |
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Yeah, I like him a lot, too. :) Thanks! |
I doff whatever metaphorical cap I still possess to you, sir.